Stylized Environment (Help and feedback)

I feel like the scene is a bit cluttered and i’m not sure what to do, i don’t really like how it looks right now, maybe i’m just knit picking issues though but let me know what i can do better on or if you like it or not…

ps (this is for a big mmorpg project lead scripter left so i’m soloing atm)

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when is that game releasing? TELL ME I WANT IT EVEN IF IT COSTS ALL MY LIFE SAVINGS! anyways enough of that and let me critisize. The first being the stone pathway is too narrow it should be more wider. and there should be more fences.

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haha, this game isn’t gonna be out for a while… i need someone to replace the role of the old lead scripter, Also thank you for the feedback i will add more fencing and look into this pathway situation.

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oh what is the game about rpg?

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Hey let me know if you need any sort of scripting help btw. Because I want this game. I really do because the design is amazing.

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Try adding a bit more contrast in the details! I can see that you’ve added what seems to be some patches of red and purple flowers, but they blend in too much with the green grass. What we want is to achieve some eye-catching contrast, so you can also add tiny bits of white/light yellow flowers like this:

(Image references from Zelda: Breath of the Wild and Genshin Impact, your game’s graphics reminded me of those).

Also, to make it feel more natural, you can add stuff like berries, tiny rocks scattered around, patches of grass that are a bit more yellowish, fruits/flowers on the trees, mushrooms, etc! All of these tips are from a landscape perspective, so feel free to play around with them as much as you’d like.

By the way, the game looks amazing so far! I’m looking forward to the process of this :wink:

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This looks VERY good! The style of this environment is very unique to Roblox!

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Ahh i was wondering what other colors i should add, thanks so much for the tips!

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Looks absolutely incredible and I can’t see how you could make it even better! Good luck on your project :love_you_gesture: :fire:

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This is really cool!! Maybe detail the lamp lights a bit more to match the trees

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Looks stunning! I wish I could create and learn this kind of map too

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Game looks great and you have variation in your plants.
If its for an mmorpg definitely aim to not have your map look repetitive.
Add in little things on the road like a wooden wagon, a broken lamp, maybe a large cluster of rocks, someone dropped something on the ground. Just these little things to keep someone looking while also having actual POI’s (point of interest)

Also I think I see particles in that screen shot but definitely include any particles because it really gives a map life ex: Glow particles on light sources, grass hoppers hopping in the grass, birds flying, pollen floating, flies or fireflies flying, falling leaves or petals, bees flying around lots of flowers.
And a little bit of sun beams!

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This looks incredible! I love this art style I’ve actually been trying to learn it myself but haven’t seemed to get it down yet like you have. Can I ask the technique you use for your foliage, I can never seem to get the triangle count low enough where i could have multiple and it not take a great hit at performance.

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It looks very good and unique! Good luck on the game or project!

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i really like the glow particle idea, ill def do that, ty for the feedback

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sorry for bumping but man whered you get the textures those are great

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I made them myself besides the roblox standard terrain textures

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