Hello. I am not done with this logo, but I was just wondering if there is anything that I can do to make the text specifically look better. Thank you.
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I’m not sure why are you trying to make the text look better, it is already good enough.
But if there was any additions you could add, i would suggest you to add a bubble trail maybe at the back of the submarine, and some fishes in the sides aswell.
Maybe if you were trying to make a major difference, i would recommend you to add a dirt floor with some sea plants, sea stars and rocks maybe ?
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He specifically said he wasn’t done with the logo, and only asked for feedback on the text, which I think could be better but I can’t exactly say how it could be better, maybe a wrap?
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Same thing, since he needed help with the logo as stated above in the title, i decided to give a couple of suggestions that could improve the overall looking of it.
But i honestly don’t know how the text can be improved… 
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I’d not use any of the logo. The submarine is half-decent but there are more ways you can feature submarines in a logo. Like this:
Just because he is asking for feedback for the text, doesn’t mean he is not open to suggestions on everything else 
He specifically asked for feedback on the text as it isn’t really fitting, he’d want the main focus of the discussion to be about the text not about the submarine. Every suggestion so far hasn’t really addressed the text issue which, again is what the main focus of this discussion should be. 
I don’t think there is a point on commenting on something that won’t serve a purpose. If the end-goal is making a satisfactory icon, then every suggestion should work towards that. Plain text could look good if integrated with a suitable background. That is why we address things that strikes within us the first. What’s the point on making a good text if the rest of the logo doesn’t look good? He makes another post and we have to redo this process.
I am open to private messaging about this regard though as I don’t want to fill this entire thread with this discussion.