Hi!
I’ve been working on a little build from the 1980s movie “The Shining”
This is an update on how the build looks and I was wondering if anyone had suggestions!
This is a scene where Jack Torrence walks into the Gold Room, the Overlook Hotels ballroom. Jack Torrence is the winter caretaker at the Overlook Hotel in the 1980s, but he starts to go insane due to isolation and the hotel itself, as it is “haunted”. Jack eventually succumbs to his insanity and the hotels “hauntedness” and one day walks into the Gold Room, where a bustling 1930s ball is happening, even though it is still 1980.
This is a fan build of the ballroom:
Here is the game: https://www.roblox.com/games/8673893666/The-Gold-Room
Please leave suggestions! I would really appreciate it!!!
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Favorite movie, I had to visit.
Feedback wise,
It’s very nice - I think you did a great job with it!
If you want to know my suggestions.
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In two places, by the bathroom doors, and by the curtains on the same wall;
I got stuck in some invisible barriers. Something weird there, I would fix.
(finished bathrooms would be nice too. It was the first the place I tried to go.)
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Just a really minor thing on the door frames, they appear uneven on the sides.
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I would keep the lounge chairs up front, and try dining chairs at most of the tables, and I think the lighting could be a bit brighter/ crisper - maybe more golden.
That’s all I got. Very nice overall.
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Ok! Thank you so much for the feedback! I will make sure to fix the uneven door frames and I’ll attempt to model dining chairs instead of lounge chairs and touch up the lighting. Thank you so much for the suggestions
P.S thank you for going into so much detail about what needs to be changed and analyzing the game so thoroughly!
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