Hello,
i’ve made a game called “TRAUMA” and im still working on it
it is a story-based game about the player to experience traumatic events with real symptoms but im out of idea,are there suggestions to add it on my game?
Game link: TRAUMA - Roblox
thank you 
SuperNova_3D
In the start, maybe make the sun glare a tad less? It makes it really hard to see the actual menu. For the “credits: ____'s watch”, I’d recommend putting that in your credits tab, rather than at the top. It seems really out of place.
As for the game, I can’t really say much because I’m just outside of the main box area. I can see you’re drawing heavily from white space which is cool, but there’s not much to do where I’m at other than clipping my camera through and observing everything. I’d give you more feedback if you fixed this bug so I’m able to play, but it seems interesting.
Weird?
I just tested that on studio and the character actually teleported after the cutscene
Must have been an API issue…
alright i fixed everything,probably gonna fix the animation after all,
now you can enjoy the game 
Hey there! I’ve recently played your game and noticed some things.
1.
The Credits and Donations thing are a bit bugged, I could say? If you’re not planning on having donations just remove them. And the credits don’t properly say your name.
Overall, the GUI looks solid, so does the game so far.
2.
The trigger in the first part is not transparent. Also, I guess you could improve the lighting?
3.
These buildings, kind of ruined the immersion for me. They obviously don’t fit with the theme.
4. The jumpscare, and the text here, broke. The text ended too quickly and I couldn’t see the jumpscare since the camera broke.
Overall, the game is decent. If it deals with trauma, make a more in depth backstory to the game.
Why is there main player suffering from trauma?, etc.
Suggestions
Overall for me, its a 5/10. Its decent so far, but it could be a lot better. Good Luck on it!
thank you!
although the game took me a month to make i decided to take a break before i probably can able to remake some parts of the game
the camera shake was a pain lol
