Sushi Bar Feedback

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#1

Heya, Devforum community! I have recently joined Devforum, and I am super excited! One of my goals on the community is to gain feedback from other creators, large and small. I have started a sushi bar restaurant, and I want some feedback on it! Any changes? Reply to this post! I cannot wait to see what I can improve on! :grin:

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#2

Welcome to the devforum! I don’t specialize in building so I can’t give feedback on too much. It looks great though. The only thing I’m confused on are the trees. Are they inside the boulders? If they are, they would look more natural in grass.

#3

Yeah, I just noticed that. I’ll be sure to change it a little! Thanks so much for the feedback! :smiley:

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#4

Hey, it looks alright so far, however:

  1. Why is it called “Pho Restaurant?” Last time I checked, phở was not sushi.
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  2. Some of the words have fallen off where I assume they should of been.
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  3. This is basic, but I’d suggest adding the rest of the walls, a roof, and an interior.
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  4. I’d also recommend making it not look like it’s floating in space; just make it so I can’t fall off.
  5. All of the palm trees are the same size and have the same orientation. Consider making some slightly smaller and rotating some to create variation.
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I can’t really provide anymore feedback as it’s not finished. But good job on what you have so far, and keep working on it.

#5

Heya! Thanks for the feedback! :smiley:

  1. Yeah, I said the same thing. The people I’m working with it made the name, so I’m just putting the group name LOL. But I’ll tell my team. Thanks!

  2. The word donation is supposed to be where it is, but I’ll consider changing it!

  3. Like I said, I just started it. But I’ll be sure to start that today. :slight_smile:

  4. I noticed that too, I’ll be sure to change it!

  5. I never took that into consideration, thanks!

All in all, thanks! I’ll be sure to implement your feedback into my build. :smiley:

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#6

The restaurant is kinda good, you should add a floor because the restaurant is leaning on the rock, if you’d change the water settings it would be great and maybe adding a small wooden dock with some small boats docked would make the map look much better, the back of the map is a bit empty, try to add something to it.

#7

Actually look’s pretty nice! You should add more details!

#8

Thanks! I added a dark-green floor on the bottom to represent the ground, and it looks good. :smiley:

#9

Omg, thank you! And I’ll take that into consideration. If you could tell me what should have more detail, that would help! :- D