In my last Creations Feedback post, I showcased a game inspired by Speed Run 4. However, it has been completely redone, about 3-4 times now.
Some information about the game:
Randomly generated stages, (100 generated stages total)
Stat saving
Clean UI
Skip Stage and Gravity Coil products
Nice music
Signs (they’re awesome)
For the both of us, this game was a challenge to make mentally. So, we’ll be taking a break for now, but please leave suggestions/feedback as we’ll be noting everything down and working on the game once we return!
Try making this sign bigger, so Players can read it in a glance rather than having to zoom their camera in.
I recommend placing some sort of fire effect on the lava, since it just looks frozen at the moment.
For the ice killbricks, they can’t be seen as easily as the platforms you’re supposed to jump on. You can either:
Place a huge “snow” effect that rises from the ice.
Place the sign closer to the Stage’s spawn.
Also, why is the lava side-by-side to the ice? That doesn’t really make much sense.
5. Would also like to introduce custom death effects when touching the killbricks. For example, if the Player touches the lava, they burst into flames and disintegrate, while if they touch the ice, they become frozen as ice forms around them, then die.
6. These killbricks for Stage 3 looks quite plain. Perhaps place something like spikes on them, to emphasize on them being dangerous to step on.
7. Would like to say that you should add badges in-game to award users whenever they pass a certain stage, or have a number of coins, to encourage player engagement.
8. These spawns are slightly hard to see depending on the stage they’re on. Perhaps, for each stage, adjust the spawn’s colour to the stage’s so it matches and doesn’t look so blended-in.
That’s all I have for you right now, so just keep working hard on your game, and you can make it more engaging!
what was actaully good: the sounds, random everytime you play, the new level UI. bad stuff: cant jump when i want with jump boooster, weird UI not fitting into the style of the new level UI, some bugs including lava bug. bug: when i touch lava, my health bar is almost at zero hp but still alive.
