Taking Feedback for my first render!

I call it, lovely evening…

Dimensions are 1440 * 780 because I couldn’t get a 1920 * 1080 picture.


The feedback is appreciated, don’t be afraid to be harsh! I’m sure I can’t take it.
To be honest with myself, it looks like one of those games where you just chill in a house with people.

And if you cared enough to unblur this, I think I’m going to make my next render western themed. Please don’t comment this lol.

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This looks ok for a beginner.

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The person’s leg blends in with the stairs. The campfire rocks shouldn’t have much textures since the render is just plastic. The buildings and the paths lack details.

The poses of the people should be better and the lighting could be improved tremendously.

Overall this could be improved greatly.

It’s considered as a beginner’s first project. You need some improvements of the maps, posing and lightings. You should keep making more GFX and improve more of the background. Overall, keep it up.

I was worried that looked wrong, and campfire rocks I think I overdid in blender, thank you for the feedback! I think I was focusing too much on the poses instead of the scenery as well.