Test out my ending type game!

hi

so i made a game i wanted people to test out, as its my first genuine game
As said in the title its an ending type game with different endings
And theres no way for me to actually know if the endings are hard to get cuz im the one that worked on them

I usually abandon my games, but i actually decided to stick to this as it is something i am capable of doing.

There are currently 10 endings as i am making this post.
Go play: Evade House Ban

thank you for playing, and tell me how it could be improved (im still a beginner btw)

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yeahh sure bro ill try it for u if u want

I played it, it was really fun to play and I enjoyed it, great game. I do have a few things though, the mountains I think they are bordering the map have a few holes, I’m not sure if it was intentional or not. The airport area you could glitch through the doors onto the plane.

Really good game though, definitely going to finish.

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Hey Rothisk,

I know this might sound like if it the reply was ai-generated, but it isnt

thank you very much for playing my game and giving feedback!
To anwser a couple of your questions, the border gaps arent intentional but there is an invisible part so that you cant fall off the map.

And i will be sure to fix your bug mentionned in the airport!

Thank you :smile:

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It’s a really good game, I’m gonna play it with a few of my friends tonight. It’s replayable as well, which is a good quality for the game to have,

its an interesting game with some cool ideas, but it definitely needs polishing.

The main menu is really basic, add stuff in the background of it

All the dialogue in the game is too fast, you dont have time to read some of the longer sentences. For example, I had no idea what was happening in the starting cutscene as it was way too quick

I noticed a lot of z-fighting on the perimeter of the map

Add more sound effects. The only sound that is prominent in the game is the background music which can get repetitive

Add more dialogue options for the NPCs. Idk if it was glitched or something but every NPC talked about DJ Khaled which was repetitive

you give some interesting points, but I think that’s the idea of the game. It’s meant to be wacky and fun and goofy and slightly repetitive.

I know that, I’m just saying it would be more capturing and fun if:

Npc dialogue made some kind of noise
Digging through trash made a noise
Placing trash made a noise
etc.

Small stuff like this can really make or break the immersion of a game, even a silly one like this

yeah, thats a really good idea!

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once again ty for the feedback!

i also had an idea for placing/digging trash but it kind of stayed in the back of my head and i forgot to add it.

Also for the npcs talking about dj khaled, the text is randomized, so i think ill need to make it so it cant say the same text twice?

local responses = {}
responses = {
	{
		'What do you want',
		'...Money?',
		'ugh its another one of these beggars..',
		'whatever take my money',
		'Umm.. thank you?'
	},
	
	{
		'Hey dude, sorry for what happened',
		'its fine but im in dangerous need of money rn',
		'lemme help you out',
		'sorry rn i only got 20 bucks ill get u some more later',
		'its fine thank you tho'
	},
	{
		'if you are here for money im as broke as you',
		'but you can still afford a house?',
		'...',
		'good point, fine ill give you some',
		"thanks",	
	},
	
	{
		'Hello, can I help you?',
		'Yes please im in dangerous need of money',
		'ok fine',
		'erm heres you money',
		'thank you'
	},
	
	{
		'broke person',
		'thats mean',
		'im too rich to care about you',
		'take my money and leave',
		'thank you?'
	},
	
	{
		'WHAT DO YOU WANT BRO I WAS LISTENING TO DJ KHALED',
		'money',
		'WE THE BEST MUSIC',
		'DJ KHALED',
		'yeah im just gonna secretly take the money in your pocket'
	}
	
	
	
	
}


return responses

Even tho the play screen on load is dry, which i agree with, i cant find anything to add. Do you perhaps have any suggestions?

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If its randomized then it shouldnt really be an issue, but for me it only used the dj khaled line. I have no idea why that happened

As for the main menu, maybe create a shot of the homeless character sitting in a box in the neighborhood or something to focus on the main idea of the game–being homeless. Really anything is better than what it currently is

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Even tho the play screen on load is dry, which i agree with, i cant find anything to add. Do you perhaps have any suggestions?

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I think the load screen is good it fits the vibe of the game

now that is a good idea

Ill be working on it and adding it to my next update to the game

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it is absolutely better than the last one. Keep working at it!

Hi Mustang!
I took all the feedback you gave and added to the game.

Would you mind testing it out again?
And maybe try to get some endings?