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#1

hi

so uh i made a game with my friend and i want people to test it out

Bring your noobs to the end (Free Level Version) - Roblox

in the original version levels cost “gems”, but in this version they are all free
its the same thing for the skins in shop
im not going to spoil anything, but you should go test it out :smiley:

here is the “real” game
Bring your noobs to the end! - Roblox

if you want to see our progress and is interested in the game, join our discord server here:

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#2

The noobs keep pushing you and stay way too close to you, that proximity prompt makes it hard to read the signs, and if i press read, the noobs push me and i still cant read the sign, add much more polish, the game will 100% fail if you make the stages paid, find another way to monetize, singleplayer games don’t work too well on roblox, there’s also a bug where when you die you get stuck under the floor

#3

hi! thank you for the feedback. we understand your concern about the game stages being monitized, and because we cant really find a solution to that, could you propose any ideas?

for the sign, in an incoming update we will change it soon :smiley:

for the bug where you get stuck on the floor, it is a roblox bug when you die while jumping and get tped back to the invis part, which is why we made “force end” a thing.

thank you for your feedback :smiley:

#4

There are many ways scripting wise to avoid that

#5

You should probably move the teleport part a little bit higher.

#6

This is very cool concept imo and you’ve done quite alright so far!! Here’s my feedback:

  1. Pls make the noob uncollideable with the player make them invisble/transparent when reading the signs. Even if it’s been intentionally left so the game’s more chaotic, I still believe it should be removed.

  2. Polish the map a little bit. So far you have a good style going for you but I believe you should add a bit more decor and detail, better lighting and just overall enhancements. Also, consider doing the same for the ui (and also add tweens maybe where needed).

  3. Scripts need a tiny bit of optimisiation, there was delays when I tryed to enter a level and actually start playing (again not sure if thats intentionally). Also, my noobs didn’t teleport all at once when i stepped on the orange panel. Everything else was fine though.

  4. Last random thing, but the text in the thumnail annoys me so much, i don’t know why :sob: :sob: :sob:. Maybe try something like this (but this is just my opinion):

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Anyways, hopefully you’ve found my rant at least a tiny bit helpful. Good luck with your game!!