I need some suggestions and feedback! My horror game needs improvement; at times, it feels boring and lacks atmosphere. Even in terms of gameplay it lacks at times.
I would love to hear suggestions and ideas from a player’s standpoint on how I can make the game more fun, less boring, and better overall. By adding things like more sound, more scenes etc. Thank you so much - Graveyard Shift [Horror] - Roblox
i didnt really have much time so i didnt get to see alot… But this is what i think.
Right when i join, instantly im facing a Donation leaderboard, and if im right it looks like freemodel, but changed a little, and i think a donation leaderboard is not good to be in a horror game (in my opinion), else its ok to have it but atleast change it to fit the game style like putting the leaderboard on a huge gravestone and instead of a their character dancing, remove it and put their icons beside or in front of the name.
Next is the gamepasses, having a VIP gamepass might be the… sorry im saying this, worst idea… and a gamepass for a boombox only to play in the lobby? i wouldnt want to stay in the lobby to hear music. The Modern flashlight is a meh, but an… i guess ok idea? i just kinda hate seeing all
horror games have a useless gamepass. else the Increased Walk Speed is kinda ok. Wanting to make robux and random gamepasses is good… if you want to steal kids money that they stole from their parents. Try to make gamepasses that could fit to this type of horror game, almost like the Increased Walk Speed. dont ask what gamepasses cus idk what could fit to a horror game…
Now to the game. The story goes ok but the first cutscene where you see the ghost for the first time, was a little lame and blank, Camera changes, See Ghost, Say “WHAT WAS THAT!!!” maybe change it so it isnt THAT early you see it. And when you get the crowbar, the ghost is already chasing me… it would be a great idea if the ghost could come out later in the game with a cutscene showing you they are near you and looking for you. And When its chasing you, it would be better if you could make it so when you see it close to you and it sees you it, it starts chasing you with any type of chasing sounds like static and maybe ghost sounds playing in your ears or chasing music, when you get far away it stops, almost just like The Rake.
But this is what i think, and i really would like to tell you more ideas and what should or should not be in a horror game. sorry for mostly negative things… but i hope your game turns out to be great in the future! also you dont have to listen to me, just som suggestions.