“The Alleyway” - Roblox Showcase
G’day, everyone! I’d love to get some feedback on my first ever showcase “The Alleyway”! All feedback, good or bad is accepted. 
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All assets, except for the criminal are created or edited by me.
Pretty good! The only problem is that some parts are in other parts. Just delete the baseplate and it should be perfect! 
Thanks! I’ve added that change!
Hey! Definitely a cool showcase you built. I am a big fan of the simplicity and the few story elements you implemented, yet, there are multiple things you might want to go over again.
I don’t think this gap is supposed to be there
The doors look a little odd, they should be a taller
Compared to the other buildings, this roof looks quite off
Apart from these minor flaws, you really did a nice job. Can’t wait to see what you create next! 
Looks pretty nice, although the lights on the lamppost looks like a lamp model from templates in studio.
This is pretty good! Remember though, you want some variation so viewers don’t get bored. Maybe add small differentiations in the buildings on the first alleyway. Another thing you want to make sure of in a map is that players can’t exploit any elements in it easily. When I jumped behind the fence between the buildings, I fell through the map.
Another thing is you might want to turn off rthro support. When I respawned I got stuck in the pavement.
Heya KingBloxay.
When I entered the showcase I instantly noticed the buildings were all the same thing, they didn’t look unique or anything like that.
The Design isn’t that great, could use better lighting, and a little bit more detail.
The lighting could be better and I wish there was a bigger map.
Hello! Thanks for the feedback! I added/fixed all of the errors you pointed out!
Hi, thanks for the feedback! I’ve changed those things you pointed out!
Are those lanterns free models? Edit: garbage bags too
