The Duelists! BETA

I want feedback on how to make it better or what you rate the map and modeling.

ARENA

TRAINING PLACE

MEMROIAL FOR HEROES

MARKET PLACE

THE DOCKS (Sorry if its downloadable to see)

THE LIGHTHOUSE

THE PUBLIC MINES

Helpers:
DeveloperYoutuber - Owner
HOONZIKCZ - Builder
PoonVader - Scripter

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It looks pretty nice! Do you have the game link I can give you feedback.

i had 2 days where it was public but i made it inactive

Iā€™m guessing its good for 5 likes and 0 dislikes

Any chance you could make it public for a bit?

Hmmmm sure give me 2 minutes and it should be public ill link u it

Okay. Looking forward to see.

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here it is The Duelists Sneak preview - Roblox

So first of all, you should make a skip button when your having the tutorial. On the training build the name Sensei is spelt wrong. Quite a lot of the stuff is blocky. You should change the colour to orange as it is to bright on the eyes Roblox (gyazo.com).

thank you for being honest we take rates and etc serious

Some things that really stood out as odd,
The text here is a bit hard to read
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The lighthouse should have a base that is bigger compared to the actual light part. There is also usually an area around the lighthouse to look around and the top of the lighthouse needs detail.
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This arena looks great but maybe fit the edges using a plugin. Also from a game perspective make sure the arena is big enough for practicality because it looks quite small.
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What is that silo thing? Seems very stretched but its hard to recognize what it is/
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Overall not bad for a build.

Im afraid plugins could make the game like laggy or people could effect it but i will take ur notes in

Resize and align would work really well. Also Archimedes, gapfill

ok thank you i will try to use them soon