It just comes down to polish and target audience. I’m personally not really the target audience for the game (I barely play Roblox games anyway). I don’t think you can ‘fix’ the target audience in any way, but then it just comes down to polish.
The small details always spoil a game. In my Tycoon, problems with the jeep (which you can’t get until after some time), were extremely noticeable in feedback and some KPIs went up after just fixing it. I thought it was quite a small thing, but the players thought differently.
I think it would be great if you could find some testers to provide you (targeted) feedback and get them to play some multiplayer together, that way you can definitely polish the game a bit more.
Going through all dialog, and improving it, would be great! You don’t want stark differences in the game due to age; the release version is expected to be of the same quality around the board.