The Lumberjacks (GFX)

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GFX:

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The lighting looks like it’s maybe like fall or something, so maybe make it so the trees are during fall? The trees also look really generic which not really sure if you’re going for that look, but maybe use photoscanned assets add some displacement to make it look more natural instead of just a perfect smoth log. Some extra vegetation around the tree trunks will really help blend them together from the ground. I suggest using a hdri since the lighting doesn’t match the background and just looks fake. Since theres a log that’s been cut maybe have a tree trunk he cut from. Even if he moved it, it would make a lot more sense for a tree trunk to be in view. I really like how theres leaves falling from the trees and everything else looks pretty nice, good job!

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