The Pyramids [ 10 new Stages ]

Update:

10 NEW Stages

Please give me some suggestions for new updates or some feedback.
Link: https://www.roblox.com/games/4568333375

What is “The Pyramids”?

It’s a escape - game [Obby], where you have to solve obstacles to escape the Pyramids.

I hope you enjoy playing my game.

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No it shouldn’t, this is meant for Cool Creations.

[feedback goes here once I’ve played]

It starts off like an update, but then the user asks for feedback.

A very cool game! The builds are impressive, and I like the addition of puzzles mixed in with classic tomb traps like quicksand, arrows, etc. Though there are some spots that need more attention to detail (ex. Flinging the character on the 56th stage, the 6 door room), it’s a very nice game! I’d also love to see what we can do with Jewels, since theres no real use for them as of now

So far, its a great game, keep up the good work!

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Nice game, but there’s one problem:

THE START CREDITS

Kids younger than 10 are gonna think it’s too long and leave. People with dizzy problems are gonna get… dizzy.

Add a skip option for that. Otherwise this is one of my favorite obbies.

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Okay, thank you! I’ll add a skip button as soon as possible :smiley:

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Thank you very much for your feedback :smiley:

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Hope I’m not too blunt.
Anyways, the first thing I noticed when I spawned was the GUI, which is a bit intoxicating.
It should/probably be overhead.
I also noticed the lighting was a bit, well, bright?

uhh… my checkpoints didn’t work.
the intro is very long and isn’t smooth…
i’d say its an OK game but you need to work harder on it

This does seem like a very challenging game. It is very very good and well done. I love the intro, but it takes a long time to get in the game, you should probably not put the credits in a cutscene, because it is very long.

Try taking inspiration from tower of hell a bit. It does seem like a obby typed game. This is very related to like a minigames type game where you have to obstacles to win, but it only includes 1.

I checked out the game and have a phew critiques but its good :smiley:
-Add more details make it feel like your in an oasis in the desert and you have to hike to the pyramid or something.

  • Make the Obbies more challenging and limit the Gui’s you want someone to feel imersed
    -Make the Obbies more complicated meaning add timing and Puzzles A pyramid is never complete if you dont add egyptian puzzles!
  • Fix the camera tweening, no offense but the angle are somewhat bizarre in a critique way not that im calling it bad.
  • Make the obby different and unique! I’ve played so many of the same base of obbies and have kind of gotten bored.
    i hope this has helped you thanks a ton!
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love the intro to the game. wish it had a skip button bottom left, personal preference.
the UI could be themed better to fix the aztec theming.
the platforms on first level are z-clipping in middle
the dying animation is cool
stage 7 is hard due to balls falling on your face
stage 10 dummy bright and also I was dying without noticing the health bar at bottom… I think that’s what it is, maybe you should label it health bar.
whenever my friend dies I can hear the DOOT even from loading screen…
please add skip title screen…
54 RNG tile level the blocks don’t go in all the way so if you hug wall its pretty easy!
I enjoy the amount of levels you have set up and all with no lag…
you have many options to hide GUI on all places expect the bottom chunky one. that would be a nice add on.

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This was amazing! Keep up the good work. Me and @CrillicD loved it!