No offense but for your builds, programming, and especially logos you should be looking for experience and not pay.
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You need examples of programming.
Okay, so how Firescroll said…
You need to provide more examples of programming, the thing you provided is fairly simple, and you’re charging 12k for scripting, which means you need to show what can you do, not just simple math and if statements, you need to show some systems you made, etc.
And if you are new to making logos, you shouldn’t sell them, just gather experience and you will do better.
I don’t wanna sound rude, just saying my opinion.
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I believe you actually need experience rather than jumping into commissions because
Scripting
You actually don’t show much skills with scripting. It just looks like you watched a tutorial on how to script and then just put it there.
Your coding is quite basic. You don’t show how you would implement it into a game nor do you show your ability in using services like tweening. Furthermore, I don’t see anything like cframe, vector 3 etc. I’d suggest either updating your scripting with more examples or just remove it.
Building
Your building isn’t too bad. However, it’s quite old style. Not many people are looking for that style. I suggest spending more times on builds and modernising them. Look at other people’s portfolio for inspiration.
Logos
Your logos are very basic. I would improve it a lot more.
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Builds
Your builds aren’t bad, but they sorta fall into the style of basic and old Roblox, like the 2013-2015 range. However, this limits your commissions to those wanting those nostalgic feelings, which isn’t much of the building market. However, since you’re not really looking for commissions here compared to your others, those photos can actually help show your progression building-wise, as you mature in skill.
Logos & Backgrounds
Your logos & backgrounds could be much improved. I don’t know what program you’re using, but if it’s something like Microsoft Paint, look for another program, as it’s very difficult to create something intricate in Paint. Don’t focus on commissioning your logo work, as they’re basic, and again, bring a feel of Old Roblox.
Scripting
Usually, when you try to show examples, you don’t want to write code, but rather, show it’s result, like a GIF of something. It’ll help show what you’ve done. You can also link games that show your scripting knowledge, too.
As I already stated, I am new to Roblox scripting. I can script other things for communities such as advanced moderation discord bots.
I’d state that and show evidence, so more people can consider that area of your experience.
Tomorrow morning I’ll be able to program some Discord Webhooks I guess and maybe something with the Trello API. Any ideas? I’m also going to work on a showcase of my scripting and building now.
Do what fits you. I’ve no experience in Discord or Trello API, so show off your skills!
Alright. Thanks for the feedback as well!
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What is your discord by chance?
I like to keep my Discord private so I’ll DM you it.
If you haven’t made one before, how do you know how to make one?
I do know about how Roblox’s HTTP Service works although I didn’t state the code for it because it would be pretty boring if you didn’t know what was happening in the Discord Server
You’re asking for a lot of money in scripting, when I’ve already found 2 mistakes in your extremely simple example.
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Firstly, you capitalized the ‘L’ in ‘local’
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Secondly, you need parentheses when you use ‘and’:
if (true) and (true) then – this works
if youdont and parentheses == nil – this won’t work
(I am on mobile, which is why the script might not be appearing correctly)
I know they are small things, but your example was very simple and you should at least write your example of extremely easy script correctly.
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As far as I’m aware, if you have
if true and true then end
This won’t cause an error. I’ve done them without the parentheses when using “and” before, and they haven’t created errors.
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No offense, you look like someone who just started scripting/building/gfx. Instead of looking for selling your work (which is very basic), I suggest trying to improve yourself. For example, I only started taking Scripting commissions after 2 years of Scripting.
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As I stated, I am new to developing on the platform, but mainly scripting. I never really got the hang of building and logos are something I’m trying out. I said that I can program Discord Bots and Webhooks as well as things with the Trello API.
If you’re new, why are you selling your work? You shouldn’t be charging for things like graphic design if you aren’t good at it, not my words it’s what you said yourself.
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Forgot to mention this earlier, but if that’s the case, then perhaps update the post to that area of experience, because right now, the post is focusing on other areas where you’re still inexperienced compared to others’ portfolios.
But, if you are still new to the Discord/Trello area, please just try to focus on improving, not selling.
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