Hello! I would like to share my game
GameLink: [CHRISTMAS SEASON!!!] {The Scary Future Cabins} - Roblox
Can u give me some feedback about my new game Thanks…
How to improve on etc… and how to get players to be excited on this game
Lobby
so you need to make better colors for gui, sorry if it’s sounds offensive but when i opened tutorial and i saw those colors… my eyes are now hurt 
. And player can push itself. Cuz of it player can “fly” but it’s funny
Game
still ui and text label colors. And i only found 2 notes out of 4.
Conclution
if it’s your fist game and you made it solo. You made a mid job, you still have problems with colors. But i belive in you and you will make cool game :D.
We all start somewhere. The GUI has extremely high variance for colours (not in a good way). It feels as though you made this from free models by candlelight. You have a long ways to go, but I suggest making some of your own models or scripts first.
There is a feeling of nostalgic in the game,thats why you feel that it is made of free models and secondly,i am a solo developer so it will technically take a lot of time to do the models.
All the scripts are made by me…
Thanks for the encouragement,
Honestly there will be mutiple exits if it seems impossible to you,…
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sorry didn’t notice, but you made a great job if it’s your first game :D.
I want to see who can reach to the final cabin … It is technically possible to win…
This has a concept of escaping it…
Hope you can actually reach the final Cabin.
There are 15 of them,some are sub levels…
thats why the models are not up to standard…