Hey so I just made a song and I want some feedback ( ﹁ ﹁ )
Stream ヨルシカ – だから僕は音楽を辞めた【ZIPPERXYZ REMIX】 by ZipperXYZ | Listen online for free on SoundCloud
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the bass or the low pitched synth at the start might need some work. or just lower its volume. good song tho :DD
thank you 
this is really appreciated
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The start of the music feels slightly heavy-- a little more than it should be. Maybe add a little more buildup to the beginning of the song instead of starting with a full bass. Just my opinion though. Otherwise, great song! 
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not gonna lie the singer looks like she is drowning while singing
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Some ideas you could have implemented for the bass is choosing when to stop playing it, creating a better groove throughout the track. It might sound like a sub for now, but otherwise you could try layer it. I think it also clashes with the kick frequencies, when I think about it.
The drums are not very interesting, you have to make fillers work to transition between parts. Fillers are good!! Or you can try to change the patterns up. It’s a very simple change.
I think the vox are not very mixed in here, maybe because it sounded very honky or nasal. Sometimes it sounded piercing(my ears! 
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The sound at 1:30 requires a fix on the low-end(cut it maybe), and it sounded not so airy and ends kind of anti-climatic…
Overall mix requires a lot of fixing I think. A reference track could help this. The balance of it currently is very bass-y/sub-y and very airy and shimmery(in a bad way), which makes me think more about post-dubstep. The current arrangement is perfectly fine as it is and I doubt it requires any significant changes to enhance it.
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