Recently, i built a boat for the city game i’m working on which will have a boat in the background view of the lakes of the city. Any thoughts about it so far?.
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Nice boat, however maybe you can add some more exterior detail? Some maybe sea plants, some rust here and there, some dust and scratches.
Also, try adding some corner wedge pieces to make it seem less blocky on the edges. You can also try adding some other small things like pipes and lights and stuff on the exterior.
Right now you have an excellent base and the detail is actually already getting there, but these small changes can add more realism to the model. 
Good luck!
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Looks really nice, things i would suggest to change you can make the boat a little more outer and. You should add like some windows on the side of the boat! maybe add some windows in the front of the boat and you can provide a picture of the front if you have the time… And make the back a little higher, and add some lights to it and that’s really all…!
Good luck on your project,
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Not sure if this will be necessary, as this boat is just in the background, but it seems really thin for a boat. You could probably add a few smaller details, and those bright yellow poles look a little out of place. Otherwise it looks great… well done!
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Cool boat 
, however:
To me, the boat looks too ‘prism-like’. You should try and add something to the sides of the boat to make it more realistic. I feel that the poles look too vibrant in comparison to the rest of the boat, unless that’s intentional for the design of your game?
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Greetings, CarloBloxDev! 
Heyo Carlo! 
Personally I like that boat, but you can improve:
- The boat itself seems empty, fill it up with decorations
- These decorations can include trees, flowers, and other colorful materials/objects
- The yellow beams holding the boat do not match, and the beams themselves look ‘weak’, like it can’t support the boat
- Try making it a more neutral color tone (a light green/gray)
- Make the boat more closed and less opened
- Try adding windows and other transparent objects
Nonetheless, great job. 
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I really like the initial model however I think the proportions are slightly incorrect, given the height the boat should be double the current width, overall awesome concept!
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Hey CarloBloxDev!
Thoughts/Feedback:
- The ship geometry is random.
EX: https://gyazo.com/381b5246aa246b56a552d55b436830c4
The wedge feels out of place and does not support the outline of the ship.
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The structure does not really represent what it’s meant to be, if you were to ask me what you made was, it’d take me awhile to get to the idea that it is a boat. It just looks incredibly arbitrary.
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The ship is just generally under detailed, I feel like it still needs a makeup and revision!
Goodluck! Hope I helped!
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It looks nice, but adding some detail could make it look great. Too much detail won’t be needed because like you said, it’s in the background. But other than that, It looks good. Keep on building!
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Thank you with the response, hopefully the criticism you made could help me build a well detailed boat of what its mean’t to be!
Not a bad start for sure, I see you’re going for a cruise/yacht ship, I would recommend you look at some pictures online to improve atleast the back side of the ship as the yellow pillars do not go with the ship. Good luck!
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