https://www.roblox.com/games/7082779585/Tower-of-Noobs
Appreciate any form of feedback, and also will it do well with advertisements?
Hey there! I checked your game out and my first impression: Amazing!
Things you need to work on:
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Lighting - The neon parts are too bright! It sort of hurts my eyes! Maybe make the lighting a little less ambient!
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UI - The theme of the UI is not consistent! It looks a bit cramped and would be better if it had rounded corners!
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Build - The lobby or the starting point looks a bit empty! Maybe add more décor to make it look lively!
Positives:
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Great Concept - I love how the tower is for noobs! Most Tower games are too hard! An idea to improve on this maybe to change the tower difficulty based on level. I don’t know if this is implemented in your game since I only played 5 - 10 rounds, but its good to add that if you haven’t!
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Great Code - Everything works fine, the rewards system is a good idea and all the stats are true and work effectively!
Overall, I love the game concept and it surely has a bright future! To make it unique, add different game modes or something that has never been seen in a tower obby game! Great work!
(also, make the time longer since its a tower for noobs 
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Thank you very much for the great feedback, could you expand a bit more on the UI consistency?
Hmmm… Well, I personally think that the UI designs are quite different from each other and they don’t have a specified theme to it. If you look at games like ToH and Mad City, they have a theme in their UI which makes sure that the UI flows throughout the game!