Thoughts on a commission I did?

Link on Twitter: x.com
(Twitter really degrades the quality sometimes, super sorry!)

Kept getting an error trying to upload the video here, so only choice was to show the one on Twitter.

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It looks very well matched and complete. Although this may just be the video but it does seem a little bright at points.

Wow. That look really good, nice colour choices, great attention to general detain and the camera tracking is on point!

Maby make the spawn point transparent and sometimes the camera can clip through objects which can be a little disorientating?

Overall, this look amazing! Great job!

The whole thing looks really cool, you did a very nice job.

One thing though: There are points at which it seems extremely bright because of an abundance of neon parts. Now I’m not sure if this is because of the twitter video quality or if that’s what it looks like in-game, but there are points where the majority of everything on the screen is neon and it is quite blinding. I would suggest duplicating some parts, changing them to smoothplastic, and increasing the transparency on the neon duplicates so they glow a little less. Other then that it looks incredible.

What kind of game is it for by the way?

The colors of the map and the neon could match better, in my opinion white and orange doesn’t go well together.

https://www.roblox.com/games/3436903748/Squadron-Beta

I also did the lobby - the map that can be seen in the video on Twitter is called ‘Space Station’ in the game.