I can not do a rating out of 10, but I can tell you my thoughts. First It is quite interesting for your first build. It looks decent, but there are some parts that you can improve on. I would definitely recommend having a model of a player to help with scaling appropriately. It seems the building is rather big, but that might be the style that you are going for. The building would work decently if it were a filler for a city with buildings touching on both ends. If it were a standalone building, I would definitely recommend the trimming to go around the building and not just in the front. The window frames and door frames seem to extend past where they should, I would recommend fixing that unless if that was a design choice. The top part of the building seems to have a gap that should not be there, so I would look into that too. I hope you don’t take this criticism too harshly, I just want to give you points on what could be worked on. If this is the style you are going for then, congrats. Otherwise I hope you find something useful in what I said and I wish the best of luck to you in the future! Happy building!
Thank you for your thoughts, this is my first build without free models, I try not to use them.
Personally i don’t think that using free models will make your game look bad in players eyes. As a quote says, people these days don’t care about the effort you’ve put in, they care about your results, your success. Here’s the game i’m making right now and i admit that 70% of everything you see is free model.
Personally, I think that you should have measured the size of the builds according to a roblox avatar as the door and the windows are 10X bigger than a roblox avatar. It is also really plain and as you get better at building you can add textures and decorations to the building. Overall it’s a good attempt at a first build.