Thoughts on my build?

NinjoOnline · January 30, 2019, 7:11am

I am going for a low poly esc look, so not too low poly to the point where it’s bland, but not incredibly detailed either. It’s gonna be a hotel (only built first 2 floors so far)

I am using a build in real life as a reference (not gonna link it as I know people will just make critiques on what I’m missing) And I am not trying to just copy the build.

EDIT More progress

Changed the bush colors to be a little more lighter. Can I have thoughts on the ‘first’ story windows? They aren’t see through as the inside will not have rooms (basically just doors that would TP you to your room)

waterrunner · January 30, 2019, 7:41am

I think it looks really nice, good job. You haven’t over detailed it and you haven’t under detailed it.

StoryBased · January 30, 2019, 8:53am

It looks good so far, it definitely has potential to be pretty nice, when finished.

Abroxus · January 30, 2019, 9:00am

Is this made from Blender?

39dannn · January 30, 2019, 9:01am

Looking good

Lolaphobia · January 30, 2019, 9:30am

I really like the design, maybe you can separate the grey bricks some more to give it a nice low poly feel, that can take it to the next level.

NinjoOnline · January 30, 2019, 9:46am

Nothing in the images is from blender. Purely just Parts from studio. The lighting has been changed using Rays and Blooms and what not, but no blender

Abroxus · January 30, 2019, 1:43pm

Incredible

BenSBk · January 30, 2019, 1:45pm

I’m loving the aesthetic, especially from the front view. But turn up that EditQualityLevel

guigui3434 · January 30, 2019, 1:46pm

Great work, I like it!

JuanCupOJuice · January 30, 2019, 2:39pm

Great work. The hedges are very vibrant compared to everything else, though.

ProvenData · January 30, 2019, 2:43pm

Its good but seems too flat.

Sctrx · January 30, 2019, 3:11pm

Looks awesome.

one thing is the bushes they look out of place.

NinjoOnline · January 30, 2019, 3:39pm

Added more to the front. Gonna be add like trees, flowers, etc around the hedges, so it won’t just be dirt

but ye, I think the front of the building is basically done in terms of like details and stuff

LocationVector · January 30, 2019, 3:45pm

Build looks good for the style you where going for. It looks clean, I especially like the entrance.

Operatik · January 31, 2019, 5:17am

The design is very fine here, keep working and I’ll probably send another feedback.

Unresolved · January 31, 2019, 5:53am

Clean lines, great design. Love the arched windows and the extra “brick” work you did when it came to the lower half of the building.

My only suggestions is dialing back the color of the hedges as that shade of green looks a bit un-natural.

Zynkuru · January 31, 2019, 7:56am

Amazing, it’s really clean and well made. It’s nicely detailed, but not much which I like.

PieRicky · January 31, 2019, 8:46pm

Slightly blocky, but overall really good. Even adding the smallest details might help, especially on the outside!

NinjoOnline · February 1, 2019, 4:09am

EDIT More progress

Changed the bush colors to be a little more lighter. Can I have thoughts on the ‘first’ story windows? They aren’t see through as the inside will not have rooms (basically just doors that would TP you to your room)