Never made a trailer before but want to get better at it, I tried to hit the key points of:
- Knowing what the game is about
- What the gameplay will be like
- looks fun with a concise goal
So, How’d I do?
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Looks great, what I can say is that you should not include the mouse icon while doing “cutscenes”, only in gameplay
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Whoops! I totally missed that on that shot!
Pretty good trailer, just a few things I would change.
- The video must be under 30 seconds to upload to Roblox.
- I would get rid of the little bar at the end as no one is going to copy the link word for word, and for the group name, I would just grab your logo if you have one and put it somewhere on there.
- As @Tavikron said, get rid of the mouse, and also all UI like the leaderboard. Trailers from DOORS and other games do this to express professionalism and also it’s just cleaner.
- Recommended getting rid of the ESRB rating you added, as they did not rate your game.
There are other minor things, but I’m not trying to tear your work apart. I think that you are headed in the right direction for it. I hope you use my suggestions to improve your trailer.
Really good for a first try but here are a few thing to consider next time now I am no pro in trailer making but I still would suggest that you:
- Change the music, its too sci-fi type.
- Add some post proccessing effects as the game is quite bland.
- On 0:05 the “A GAME BY PENGUIN ARMY” the black color is quite weird, make it the same as the title.
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Honestly looks quite bad as the gui has no decoration. And doesn’t match the theme of the game. - The base gui is also not that attractive.
- On 0:25 the slow-mo effect kind of make it looks like sci-fi and also the blood on the janitors clothes.