Thoughts on my first time doing GFX?

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I tried out GFX and I think it went pretty well! How about you, what do you think? All feedback is accepted and will be used the next time I make GFX :slight_smile:

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Looks good for a first GFX. Lighting should be a tinny bit less lighted. It is bright and sorta hurts my eyes. Everything else looks very good though.

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Thanks! I will take that into account the next time I do GFX :slight_smile:

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yeah, lighting is one of the most important things in gfx. Many people make the same mistake, however your gfx just needs a little adjustment.

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Thanks! all that lighting is just from overlays, so it will be extraordinarily easy to fix

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Really nice GFX, I really like the use of props in it. The bicycle adds a more realistic feel to it. :+1:

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Really nice for a first render! Personally I’d say that the opacity of the texture overlay could be brought down a bit and as Adrian said, just dimming the light. Good work on more work! :smile:

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I like it, but people might steal it, because the watermark is so hard to see

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I think thats purposely why it is hard to see, if it was easy to see, it would be blocking it or easy to remove the watermark.

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Thanks for all of the great critiques!!

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Really amazing first GFX, i have some feedback.

  • Make the grass a bit shorter, the wheel of the bike needs to be more visible.

  • Make the title bigger and use other colors for the title.

  • You’re missing a face on the girl, please make a face.

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You are a nice GFX designer, i rate that GFX a 9.5/10 actually.

I would also pay 2000-2500 robux for that GFX.

I also have a question to you, what is that big green slump thingy :joy: (at the left) is? I suggest you to remove that.

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Ok thanks for all of the feedback hahah. The face was an artistic choice made by myself, but I would happily put a face on if someone wanted me to lol. Thanks for thinking im so good! I really want to start doing GFX since its so fun! I just need way more practice lol. As for that green thing, I will remove it. I was thinking the same thing when rendering but I just shrugged it off. Thanks for all of the amazing critiques! this is exactly what I want when I ask for critiques so its super nice to get it :slight_smile:

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Hey there,
It looks amazing! I really think that the lighting makes your scene come to life, as well as:

  • The decor placed around the render
  • The effort put into the render
  • The very detailed props

Thanks for allowing feedback on this, once again, it’s a great render. Keep up the good work! :slight_smile:

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Looks really good, I like the lighting a lot, but the text might be hard to read. Try adding some contrast between the image and text so that it pops a bit more

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This is your first time? I am not a gfx designer but this looks really good!

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Thanks so much!!

(thirty chars :stuck_out_tongue: )

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Yup, first render! I am happy that you like it!

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Ok! thanks for the critique!

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That looks better than what I can do in a 100 years, good job!

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Woah! 1st time very impressive!.. I’d only have to say maybe add some PBR textures to the plants, table and basket to bring a bit more life and some glow from the lamp. Over all good work and it looks amazing, keep up the good work.