Thoughts on my game's main menu?

what does everyone think about the menu menu i made for my game?

-dont mind the testing button btw, it’s only there for testers.
-i will add a changelog button soon but i cba rn

any feedback is appreciated - be harsh if needs be

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Problem with the font for the main white text. Maybe also change the outline colour.

Also for the green outlined text, it looks like it’s from some generic scripting tutorial. Try finding a different font. Other than that, it’s absolutely amazing, gj.

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Good base. I think there should be more going on in the background, like animated trees or particles (this is if the background is a camera shot of a 3D environment, which it should be). Also, you need to find a way to make the typewriter text one size, instead of having it change with how much text is written.

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I would make the buttons bigger and have a gradient background with a slightly more cartoony font

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Holy cow that’s amazing! I love how animated it is and how the text appears in a typewriter fashion with each letter at a time, very easy to follow with what’s going on!

I don’t think there’s much you can do to improve, great job! :heartpulse:

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can you elaborate on which text you think i should change the font of? i don’t really understand what you mean by main white text or green outlined text lol. there are a lot of green and white texts

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now that you say that, having the background be more animated is a really good idea. i’ll probably have the trees and bushes sway a little.

as for the typewriter text, i’ll probably see what it’d look like with what you suggested.
thanks for the feedback!!!

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not sure if i agree with the white text but i 100% agree with the green one.
will find a new font for that. thanks for your feedback

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Atleast thicken the stroke a bit more, it looks like an old website logo from 2006 lol

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Yeah I think its needs the banger font or something similar and different color text. other than that it looks great. Also maybe a more HD and appealing background would be good.

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I like the animations! Very interesting. It’s the very first thing that caught my attention. Good job there.

One problem though is the list. I feel like the scrolling bar is overriding the buttons when it is selected. Maybe remove it?

The main title is also on the top-left of the screen. I would move it little to the right.

I am not sure what the white slanted UI is supposed to be, but it feels out of place.

The buttons seems small to be, maybe because it doesn’t have a background. Make the text larger or add a semi-transparent background.

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It looks very good! Some of the text looks a bit too small and thin though. Nice job on this main menu! It’s very nice and unique!

make the description text as fast as the sfx. I like it, looks and feels nice

Hey, this is decent, I really like it!