Thoughts on my Island Resort?

Hey guys! I am currently working on a small holiday resort called “MBR”, Moresby Beach Resort. I think it’s pretty good for what I’ve got so far, but I’d like to get some opinions. Its about 80% done physically and about half done coding wise. I still want you to have your own room keys and the NPC to offer dialogue and Menus so food and drinks can help aid role play.

I’d prefer constructive criticism and anything in between :smiley:
if I need to add something lmk.

About: The Resort is heavily geared on the old school RPG days, where its not overly saturated in coding. Which sounds redundant in a world we are in today regarding roblox, but otherwise. It has a slow day cycle and a decently fast paced night system (just so you’re not stuck in an endless night). Most things are looked at with detail, such as- If a seat is slanted, the animation of you sitting will have you sitting upright to counteract that slant. You are mainly supposed to create your own story within the game, make it up as you play together. There is a small amount of lore and story within the resort but it doesn’t overpower your own creative freedom.


Above: Second floor Palm Lounge. my rblx character sitting there as an easter egg.

Above: Bungalow A durring the early morning, looking out to the beach.

Above: A slightly outdated areal shot.

Above: A small pizzeria and bar just across the island upon a hill with lanterns.

Above: The front walkway to the 4 story hotel. Housing 6 rooms, a lounge, a gift shop, security room, electrical room and storage rooms.

Above: the view looking up to the pizzeria from a small restaurant called “Mike’s Molotov”

Above: the small coffee shop (ignore the bottles they are temporary) just east of the pizzeria, made out of a abandoned shipping container.

Again any feedback is great! decided to add the link just in case :smiley:

Thank you Guys!!!

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While I probably wouldn’t be the demographic for this type of game, the building, environment, and overall atmosphere look great! I hope when you release the game it is a success! A question about the keys system, will you need to have a new room per server, or did you create a system where you have one room that you own regardless of the server? I’m going to assume you can’t have the hotel be infinitely large although it could be cool to see the hotel expand per each player that has a room on each server and then get smaller when a player leaves.

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Impressive ! Very unique looking, the only things I would point out is the front of the Moresby Resort could use something like a fountain or statue to give it a bit more depth, and how orange the sun is doesn’t line up with how blue the sky is - That’s all that stands out to me, well done !

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Sorry for the late reply. I really appreciate the support :smiley: :smiley:

as for the key system, you’ll most likely speak to Josh, the receptionist inside the hotel, you can then pick a room according to its availability. Upon leaving the game, the room will become vacant OR you can speak to Josh to change/abandon the room. At least that’s Ideally what I would like.

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Hey! Sorry for a late reply! Thank you so much for the interest in MBR :smiley: :smiley: I’m thrilled you like it.

I was thinking that, a statue but I just didn’t know what to put. A statue of me feels too… egotistical. Like “Oh look at me I’m the big powerful creator, look up to me” When in reality I just want to portray the “I’m just like you”. Fountain could work.

Do you mind if i ask one more thing, what do you think? should it be statue or fountain? no right or wrong answer :smiley:

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No worries about the late reply ! - I’ve had some messages go weeks without response lol

I agree a statue of yourself would be too arrogant and egotistical
I think a fountain would be fun and would give the front a nice moving feature (the water flowing).

If you have any questions about something you would like a second opinion on I can happily give my thoughts !

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Oh sweet yeah thank you! :smiley: yeah I’ll plan out a fountain or something in that sorts :smiley: If you want to we can add users. No pressure just figure I’d be easier?

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