Thoughts on my map

Hello everyone! Ok so I’m wondering about my map/lobby. Any thoughts will help! Please don’t vote on this game yet. Thanks from John.

Some things that will be fixed:

  • Text… “Will become Shop”
  • Holograms will become un collide able

Game link:

https://www.roblox.com/games/3569220756/Lab-Rats-Alpha#!/game-instances

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Having the plates close the the window might give someone more benefit over someone in the middle. Maybe add more space in the actual test chamber.

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I really like the look of the lobby so far, although it is a little basic right now. Some examples of ways you could add some more interaction into lobby are…

-Mini Obbies
-Trampolines or Slides
-Balls that players can push around
-Minigames such as lava spinners or pick a color
-Coins that spawn around the lobby

All of those things add a way for players to interact within a lobby while they wait for the next round. The longer a wait between games is, the more important an interactive lobby becomes. Adding 1-2 of those things listed above will keep players more engaged, and more likely to stay for another round of the game.

Along with that, if you look in the middle where these 8 segments form that design, you can see it glitching between segments. I’m pretty sure the way to fix this is by unioning them together, but that could be wrong.
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The windows could also be improved a little bit. The fake blocks that make up the color for the window instead of the sky make the room feel more enclosed. Instead, you could try turning that into a viewing area if you put the parkour/minigames out there.

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A few of the items are floating in the map.
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I think the tile floor is very nice in the lobby.

Also, The thumbnail is not the most eye catching. I would recommend getting a new thumbnail for the game.

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Is it based of the TV show Lab Rats from Disney XD?
Just curious.

The build is good, however the lighting in my opinion seems to even. Maybe add dim lights and bright lights mixed together to give some emotion and feeling to the scene.

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WOAH!! I’ll call your Mr Idea! Thanks for all the great ideas from John. :smiley::tada:

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Thanks, also don’t know why you float I check it out. Also the thumbnail and “logo” is temp. Thanks Cole, from John.

Already I’ll check out how to do lighting professionally, also no not for Disney XD didn’t know that show even was a thing. Well thanks from John.

I’ve updated some things.

https://www.roblox.com/games/3569220756/Lab-Rats-Alpha

This sort of looks weird;
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It’s like she’s flexing her muscles, you could move her arms a little back. You could also make them have dialogue.
Also the old guy’s mustache is overlapping his mouth.

Turn this into smooth plastic or something similar? Since it has a weird pattern from a distance.
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(You might still be working on this, but the lava doesn’t kill)


Besides that, it looks great.

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