Thoughts on my new thumbnail

good day, i’ve made this thumbnail for a customer and i need your thoughts on it, do you have some feedback i can use?

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It looks awesome! :grinning:
I’m not sure if there’s already a cape there for Batman but if there isn’t then maybe add a cape?

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alright so the main problem here is the composition i think, i need him to be way more active, have him a powerfull pose and a good composition wich in my opinion lacks a bit in this render

Looks really nice! His position is a bit awkward although.

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Wow, that’s amazing! I really love the fog effects you added, really brings out the theme. However, I would adjust Batman’s positioning.

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i changed the pose and a lot more, will send the result very soon

wow man i looks awesome but one thing i would change is make batman turn his back to the camera so that it looks like his paying all of his attention to the signal.

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Main concern for me is the helmet isn’t batman’s actual helmet…other than that looks insane!

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Looks great! I’m not sure if this would ruin the thumbnail, but maybe try adding some more light somewhere to the thumbnail because it’s very dark and the buildings are hard to make out. Maybe add light to the building windows.

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This looks really nice! And you should add a cape for batman

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Looks pretty good, but I’d the position and view to be Batman glaring outside the window, also the lighting on his front is a bit strange as I don’t see a source for it.

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That looks amazing in my opinion!

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i have changed everything, the poses and other stuff. I didn’t change the character since it was provided by the customer and it needed to be authentic to his character.

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I don’t know if this is the character, but it looks like it has a lot of “webs” on it, which looks weird.