This is the “spawn island” for our upcoming Throwing Simulator.
We’d like some feedback and criticism is needed.
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Were you live streaming the devleopmentit? I swear I saw it somewhere, but great lobby, I like the cartoony vibe.
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I wasn’t, where did you see it?
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Its looks just like a simulator lobby, looks great!
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Just like other simulators’ lobby i.e. Ninja Legends, Saber Simulator etc. Well done!
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The map is pretty good! Well-detailed but simple (I guess). A good idea is to add some thrown items scattered around. Also, a VIP exclusive area for throwing items would be nice.
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The image is noisy, but it looks good, like a casual simulator lobby!
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Greetings, your spawn island you have developed looks so great! I really see, the way you also made the architecture of the buildings in the image have been done with a good-looking appearance.
Though there should only be one tree model to make the trees in your game to look organized. Just like your tree over there,
Dosen’t fit with the other tree models considering the other tree models are resembling the pine tree.
It would be more recommendable if you could stick to a one-model style tree instead.
Overall, I appreciate your work and in my opinion this would surely attract children because of the kid-friendly appearance and colorful detail.
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It looks very cliché. Overuses neon and the checkered grass, has shop and sell as huge houses, etc. I don’t really like it. Maybe have something to do with throwing, such as 2 NPC’s throwing a baseball to each other.
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I really do like the concept and the models you have implemented and created here! I have a few suggestions as well.
In my opinion, I feel like there could be some other types of vegetation around the map mainly on the mountain parts, bushes, flowers to give the ground a little more life. Maybe add some more buildings or a secret area instead of staying on one island I believe there’s going to more vacant things like shops/buildings to make it a little more lively as well or buildings so players could buy things while they wait! You also might be able to turn down the neon a bit as it seems too bright in my opinion consider placing some benches or shrubs and bushes around the statue.
Something like that could like that could work if it’s needed. I find your variety of trees to be weird. Maybe add more? And, I notice you have a lot of the same trees re-sized around the map, on the green platform. They seem a bit repetitive, and as for your shops and buildings, as you can add more vegetation. Or possibly more things on the islands.
Other than that, it’s a good build!
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Looks great, but it does not have an original design aspect to it, also since its a simulator it needs more elevation, and spacing. Since simulator games are what I do most I believe its best to make everything visible but at the same time it needs distancing to make the “double jump” factor more interesting and easier to use. Finally maybe add some flags since thats one of the main aspects of many games.
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Lately, we’ve been receiving quite a lot of Ninja games (assuming by the shurikens), with the similar cartoon art style, I think what will put quite a lot of people off your game.
Independently, however, it is a good build.
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It’s called “Throwing Simulator” 