Hello, I made this trailer for a story game and I would like feedback, thanks! (Also, I will make the video details later, like the thumbnail, description, etc.)
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It seems good but I felt like the trailer gave away too much gameplay, I could be wrong though
And no one says “Welcome There” lol
Overall, I want to play it!
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Thanks for the feedback! The game is not released yet, it hopefully will in a week!
I personally think you showed too much of the story,specially what I assume is the main plot twist of the story.Try sticking with more simple things or just directly show what the story game is about (genre,themes,etc)
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I think it gives a 2012 roblox youtube video vibe. nostalgic
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