Thoughts on this little scene I made

So I want to know what your thoughts on this little scene I made are.

Its the background for my menu.
I was going for those an anime cartoonish vibe.

I also made a little cherry blossom map


Everything is fine but , in the second picture, the surface seems too bright…


It looks well made but seems too crowded in the first picture.

Yeah, the studio lighting is different then the ingame lighting for some reason. So it starts glowing