Thoughts on this simple game menu?

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#1

Hey, so I’ve been working on a small game lately, and I was just working on polishing up the UI a bit. The idea was lightweight and simple. Just wondered how I did with it, thanks :slight_smile:

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#2

Looks nice, maybe slow the movement in the camera a bit because of motion sickness users.

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#3

It looks very good but I would slow down the camera, watching it for only 10 seconds already made me feel motion sick.

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#4

Ok, it looks good but:

  • The typo doesn’t really match with everything else

  • The instructions aren’t catchy. Most players will just skip that part. I recommend that you add images. E.g. 1. A chees, 2. A cheese with a cube, 3. A player killing the cube. In that way you dont make it too boring.

  • Some TweenService will work on the letters and a blur on the cheese when you select Instructions or Play will look good too

  • Slow down the camera, it’s way too fast!

Good job, overall!

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#5

It looks really good! Maybe you should make the black outline a little more thick.

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#6

I’d add a box behind the text so the GUI looks better.

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