Thumbnail commision - critique

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It looks good! Two things I don’t like that kinda ruins the GFX: The candle feels too bright and doesn’t feel like the “vibe” you were going for: “Dark Room Render” Also the sword is not being held right, one more thing is the detail/props, there are no other stuff other than a candle and the character, maybe add some more props/details? Other than that its good.

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looks really nice, but I think the candle is too bright, you should fix the pose too might as well add some props, other than that it looks really nice

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character is way too glossy for clothing, i suggest you add up roughness, and what you can do is make some vissible clothing material like i did here

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How do you make the clothing look like that?

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Clothing folds/3d clothing. There’s a node setup for it but I forgot it - look up ‘how to do 3d clothing roblox blender’ on youtube.

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