Hey!
I got a commission recently and I made my first proper thumbnail.
I haven’t been doing GFX for long but I’m pretty proud of it!
Any suggestions or feedback?
Thanks!
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You did a great Job there! I love the lighting that you have done!
You did also some nice effects for the Eggs.
cool the only thing i would change is maybe haves some pets in there .
Looks really good, just a few minor problems:
One of the hands on the guy on the right (forstaken/tofuu?) looks like it may be clipping with the torso (his left, our right), and is the thing below his face a beard, or a tie? I think it may have gotten disconnected from the rig…
Overall, the lighting effects look really nice, but I think a brighter time of day would be the way to go with this… imo it’s just a bit dark.
I don’t know if you made the logo on the top right, but I think the black would look a bit better not a a background, but as an outline for the text.
Other than those few things, really good job! Looking forward to seeing your work on games! 
(Also, you might want to put a watermark on the image to prevent theft)
The GFX is honestly really good but there are somethings that needs to be changed.
- The lighting does not match the scene.
- The fountain looks too plain and boring.
- The sky looks too realistic for this low-poly map.
The good things about this are:
- The character posing are very good.
- The eggs are nicely placed and edited.
- The lighting near eggs are not too bad but could be more brighter as the eggs are quite bright.
- I love how you got the particles behind those eggs as a trail.
- I would recommend adding a watermark so that others don’t steal your work.
That’s all I can say about this. Good job mate!