FEEDBACK ON MY SMALL GAMES APPRECIATED!
Hello there! I’ve been building all sorts on roblox for a while now, because of how enjoyable the platform is to use, and would love some criticism and feedback on what I’ve made so far, so that I can improve myself!
Following on, there are a few links to places that I have made on Roblox, If you do end up helping, please say what place you’re giving feedback on! Thank you if you do! 
- Totally Genuine Aquarium experience link - A half-hearted little ‘lore’ game. More based on building than scripting.
- sepelire in praeteritum experience link - First ever attempt at a scripted horror-ish game. Focused more on scripting than building.
- Untitled experience link - Ok so this one takes a few puzzle aspects, In order to reveal a message after placing swords on statues. It’s very small, and there’s only a few steps, such as standing on wooden plates in order to redirect a beam of light. This puzzle is not immediately obvious.
- SNAILS experience link - Again, this one takes puzzle aspects in order to ascend floating islands as a snail. It’s quite small, but the puzzles are more easily identified then the previous game.
Again, I do not expect anybody to give any feedback, but if you would then thank you very much. 
