Tiny soldier toys inside a massive war - showcase

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#1

This is a showcase, I am posting what work I am doing currently in case you are interested in my work. Please note; I am not for hire! I am posting my process and how I am developing new skills in graphics designing. I maybe will be for hire in the future, please give me some feedback on my projects

Showcase - Tiny toy soldiers inside a massive war. [D-Day GFX]

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#2

Its very bright, and I don’t know what’s going on. The idea with a GFX is that you KNOW what is happening, I don’t need a title.

Also, it is rendered in studio.

Use blender, it is much better.

Also, is the boat in the background your model, or did you just grab it from the toolbox?

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#3

I refuse to believe you made that in blender

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#4

Not saying its bad, because I used to be at that stage too years ago; however, It needs a lot more work put in before I would consider hiring.

Tips:

  • USE BLENDER
  • Default sand, try using more realistic sand. Like sand from a sandbox.
  • I have a hard time seeing what the soldier’s are doing, change the color a little or fix the lighting.
  • The ship doesn’t look good like that
  • Needs more story/ details added
  • Water to sand looks really weird straight like that.

Hope this all helps!

Misc.

You say 'Massive War (D-Day), when there isn’t any battle happening.
Also, this isn’t a graphic design.

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#5

It wasn’t made in blender, as I am a very beginner, I only made this in 3d viewer (for lighting) thats it.

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#6

Okay, thanks for the feedback. I will post my next showcase of something made in blender!

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