This is a GFX I made, but something doesen’t seem really right to me! Something just feels off. If there is any tips, help or feedback, it would be appreciated! 
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It’s a good GFX and I see what sort of style you’re going for.
To make it better:
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Use a software rendering program like Blender to pose your characters instead of in ROBLOX studio. You can also use Blender image rendering to produce your pre-edit render. Use light sources to create shadows and make the render altogether more realistic. You can use this tutorial to learn how to do so. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kUZcKKdnNfs
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Make the text contrast more with the character and background so it is easier to read.
If you need any other feedback, feel free to ask.
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Ah, thank you for the feedback. The reason why I am not really able to use blender is because my device doesn’t really support it. But thank you for helping me!
If you are unable to use Blender, I suggest you use Cinema 4D instead.
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Ooo, I will try that out! Thank you!
Looks decent, these are my Tips & Feedbacks:
The background, text nor does the characters body pose fits or looks that well made.
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First, the background, light blue doesn’t match with black type of clothing the character is wearing. Always match the character with it’s background
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Second, the text, as said for background, light text doesnt match the black clothing the character is wearing. Maybe make the outline of the text black?
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Third, the characters hand is kind of out of the shape, take a look at this:
In my opinion, that doesn’t look that great, use blender to do the pose for characters instead of using R15 to do the posing. -
Fourth, there is a line in the middle of the face and the hand, get that out of the way, it blocks the face and the hand a little.
Hope this helped, goodluck on your GFX!
Edit: You’ll need blender or C4D in order to do GFX, if you can’t have neither if these, you’ll have problem on your GFX career sadly. Might want to upgrade your device?
Thanks! This helped! As I said above, blender doesn’t really support my device. I’m going to try out Cinema 4D, thanks for helping
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It’s decent if your more of a beginner or just starting out i would however consider using placing a background to improve the design so the text stands out a bit or you could include more characters in the background socializing and interacting with different users – not sure if you’ve already planned that.
Why not try including items in the characters head or different things in the background.
I don’t know but is the character supposed to have a white outline around the entire character. If your wanting that effect it kind of looks noticeable, it’s a good start hope to see what you take this in the future you could even use softwares and see which one your comfortable with.
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So the only problem here is that the color of the background and the color of your avatar don’t match. You should make the background a dark red and if your confused on what i mean by match then i’ll give an example below, other than that keep up the good work!
Hello! I think you should give a more fitting concept to the work. Your avatar has a red-black color scheme, but the background and text outline is pastel blue, which does not really match each other. I think the text could have much more work, too. The font use is quite common to see, and does not fit the style of your avatar. I can also see the last part of the letter Q cut off. You can also try making the text larger.
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