Would just like some tips on how I could improve my shirts.
Blank design of one of my basic short sleeve shirts.
Any tips or feedback is greatly appropriated.
apologies if this is the wrong category, first time using it.
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I like it but some suggestions: more obvious shading, I can see youve shaded but when I looked I didnt see it right away, another suggestion is white around the neck whole as it looks very plain, thats it great work!
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I don’t find how this would look great on a player. You colored the actual arms, meaning it will appear on the player themselves. The shirt itself is too “square” and perfectly even, which isn’t realistic.
I would consider removing the arm color, making the shirt sleeve edges more “curved” and realistic, making the neck hole larger, and fix any mistakes, such as shading, coloring, etc.
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Oh, no no.
The arm color is simply for my showcase, the shirts themselves have no skin color added to them.
However I agree the necks do need some work on them but thats been a goal I’ve been trying to fix for a while.
As for the curved edges, that doesn’t sound like such a bad idea, and I’ll give it a shot.
Thanks for the feed back, you’ve helped alot <3
Well it looks like a nice t-shirt, but seeing how it’s hard to make it through roblox by selling shirts and pants, I’d recommend you sponsor these in a game that could use it. Maybe a fashion shop.
It looks good, but it’s just a shirt. It looks like something you’d want to wear if you don’t want to express that much detail, it’s something I’d wear (problem being that I’m not really into the black color)
Maybe you should make the details more noticeable, I can see there’s some small details on it but nobody will ever notice, maybe if you increased the contrast of it it would be noticed. Or it wouldn’t matter much because it’s just a black t-shirt.