Hey! I just recently made a small showcase of my low poly work.
Please enjoy and hand me any feedback.
Just meant to be a wee island, nothing much!
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Pictures for busy people
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Honestly, I feel like this showcase is half baked, if you want an honest review, you should really just go back into blender, or whatever 3D modelling software you use, and create more assets, because right now, there’s not much to critique.
Don’t be afraid to spend more time on showcases, it’s not a race.
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Chocolauf
(Laufeyson)
May 2, 2021, 10:16pm
#3
It isn’t meant to be alot, sorry, I will add that in the post.
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I found just a simple bug. I was testing out the donations to see if they work and they didn’t.
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Oh, if it’s just a small island, then I suggest you remove the walls, and add more bumpiness to the terrain.
If you’re going to do that, using references for the terrain would also help you.
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Chocolauf
(Laufeyson)
May 2, 2021, 10:19pm
#6
Can you send a video please? I would like to see what happens once you click it.
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Chocolauf
(Laufeyson)
May 3, 2021, 12:02am
#7
More terrain added, I think it pops out now.
Picture
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More details! Rocks now have texture.
Picture
Forgive me for the awkward pose, I was doing an emote.
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Rxse_Dev
(martin)
May 3, 2021, 2:32pm
#9
Love it! I personally, LOVE the Low Poly style, some people can’t pull it off but you did great!
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Chocolauf
(Laufeyson)
May 3, 2021, 2:35pm
#10
Very kind of you, thank you for the compliments.
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Chocolauf
(Laufeyson)
May 3, 2021, 5:11pm
#11
Added bugs! They are pretty small, most aren’t noticeable.
Picture
Dare you to find em all!
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Rxse_Dev
(martin)
May 3, 2021, 6:08pm
#12
I did the hunt! (Do the hunt before you look at these)
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Chocolauf
(Laufeyson)
May 5, 2021, 6:01pm
#13
Anyone have any cool ideas for me to make and put in this showcase?
I’d like it to fit the nature theme I have going on, I will give you a
special mention in the description if your idea gets in the game.
Thanks for reading, have a great day!
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Add some sort of jungle with some small huts. Might be fun.
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Chocolauf
(Laufeyson)
May 8, 2021, 2:38pm
#15
Sadly, I don’t think that’d fit in this showcase, maybe I will create another one sometime soon with your idea.
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Chocolauf
(Laufeyson)
May 11, 2021, 3:13pm
#16
Added pictures! Now if you don’t have time, you can still see my showcase.
The only thing I can really comment on is how flat the ground is.
It makes it look a lot more plain than it should be, and I highly recommend adding higher areas on the ground, obviously nothing too much, but something to make it less boring.
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Chocolauf
(Laufeyson)
May 11, 2021, 5:27pm
#18
Wow! The great Musketfall has seen my post, I am grateful for your feedback, thank you.
Already an improvement, but I meant something like this aswell.
Huge apologies for the assets in the screenshot.
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Chocolauf
(Laufeyson)
May 11, 2021, 6:59pm
#20
Took me quite a while, but I finally finished one, thank you for the suggestions @Musketfall