It honestly looks pretty cool. One or two things I would change if you were still looking for improvement are;
I would somehow get a bit more contrast between the text/buttons and the background. I am unsure how exactly this looks in-game, but from your screenshots, the Credits button is nearly invisible and the text isn’t precisely eye-grabbing.
If you want to elevate the professional/finished feel of your game to the next level, having buttons with the same kind of font that the “toaster island” title is in, would look great in my opinion. I honestly really like the “toaster island” text.
Overall, a great improvement from your last post, and if you want a bit more improvement I would suggest considering some of my feedback. Keep up the great work!