"What are you working on currently?" I’m Currently working on improving my building skills, I built a training center, Probably my third ever build, and I need feedback on how to improve it!
I used a Tree,Palm trees,rocks,and more meshes from an asset pack. The chairs are from the same asset back, I didn’t create these assets. Other than these items, I did everything else. (Not the kitchen)
Feedback would mean a lot, since I’m trying to improve!
Let’s start off with your Group A & Group B chairs. Firstly, I believe the chairs are fine, and the font labelling the groups is good as well. Though, it seems like ‘Group A’ is misaligned with the part that it’s on. So, I’d recommend adjusting that.
Subsequently, once more regarding these groups, if you could just slightly move them both to the left to align it with the stage, that will make it so people don’t get annoyed at the minor misalignment once more.
Now, regarding your stage, the platform itself is done well, and I have no recommendations regarding that specific asset. However, you firstly have one label here that is misaligned:
Additionally, I feel as the font that you have chosen is a bit too slim to read, and doesn’t quite fit the environment. Lastly, I will recommend taking the pads that you stand on, and making them less wider, at least for the single pads, like for Co-Host, Host, et cetera.
Regarding the rocks on the exterior part of the island, while I recognize that you didn’t make them inherently, if you could, perhaps try to make the white part of the rocks a bit more gray? If you can, great, if not, that’s fine.
I apologize, but I can’t quite deduce what this specifically is:
If it’s supposed to be some sort of geyser or hot tub, I certainly don’t recognize it, and I’d recommend you’d work on making it seem a bit better.
Regarding your office, that it seems, I have a bit to say here. Firstly, the monitors look like the size of a phone, and I’d recommend that you try and increase the size. Regarding the mouse and keyboard, I can’t quite actually see the details, but from my perspective it looks fine. The design that you were going for the desks seems great, though, quite a lot of misalignments are spotted here.
So, overall, I believe you did a decent job. Sure, there’s a few nooks and crannies that I’m not all particularly fond of, but the idea and the effort that you put is is exquisite. Though, in regard to improvement, I recommend trying to get a bit better at alignment. If you build on Roblox Studio with the tools, I’d recommend that you go to your Snap to Grid/Alignment feature, and use the following stud increments: 0.125, 0.25, 0.5, 1
What I suspect that keeps driving your misalignments is that you use certain stud increments that don’t go well with each other. If the alignments don’t work well together, your positioning and scaling will be just a bit off. By having alignments that can add itself to 1 perfectly, you won’t have this issue.
Hope my feedback was helpful. Good luck with your work.
Thank you a lot for the feedback, also I have explanation for why the build isn’t perfect, It is actually my third ever build on roblox studio, and i did the build in one day.
Will put your suggestions into account!
Also,this was supposed to be a lowpoly fountain, I can provide the link for the game if you want to see how it looks in-game.
Sure, if you wish to, I’ll come by and see it more closely.
Here is the group where you can find the game and the game itself.
Our Roblox Group: Galoree | TM - Roblox
Our Training Center: Galoree Cafe! - Training Center! - Roblox
Alright, upon closer inspection, it looks better than what I anticipated. Though, the fountain looks more like a swamp, mixed with immense smoke? I would recommend putting some walls around the fountain, and lessening that smoke.
Upon closer inspection with the chairs, I just realized that they’re tilted just a tiny bit up. Try to make it so that chairs aren’t rocking chairs, unless if that’s the intention.
Over in the kitchen area, the floor seems to be having some Z-Fighting, and I’d recommend to either union the floor, or use the trick of making one floor 0.001 studs higher.
Also, the teleportation used to put ranks with no authority off of the stage is quite glitchy.
If you want, I could take a look at the script, but that’s up to you.
Hm, Should i revamp the Training center? It looks like there are a lot of bugs, and mistakes in the build. But, this was made in one day, so it isn’t perect!
In my perspective, there seems to be no need for a revamp. Sure, there’s quite a bit to fix, but that doesn’t mean you have to redo everything. Afterall, most of my criticism is a recommendation, it’s nothing that you’re obligated to fix.
Alright, one last question, should i revamp to be in side? Like the same build without terrain, but it will be inside with better lighting and all the fixes you included.
Personally, I liked the idea of a training center being on an open island, but overall, that executive decision is up to you. If you want to go without terrain with buildings, go right ahead.
@Gavin42307 is it fine if I add you on roblox? If that’s fine, since i always have scripting problems, also if you managed to join my group, tell me so i can rank you to a noted.
I suppose, though, keep in mind I rather not get myself tangled with another project to work on, as I already have three under my hands to work on. Though, feel free to contact me if you have some issues with scripting.
They’re a bit generic and there’s not enough exterior fundamentals not décorations.
However it’s still usable in most conditions.
(Note: Maybe it’s better if it was more creative so people won’t get too bored listening to dumb rules, try a zeppelin, a Cruise, a plane, a treehouse…
