Hey i guys! I drew this for someone’s twitter banner! Twitter cut off the bottoms of the thing, so that’s why hes cut off ;’(. Give me your constructive criticism please!
Why is Ysko trying to grab my face?
I’m not rlly an arty person so I have no real constructive criticism, just writing to say yh I think its neat, no one else has lol.
he is wants to touch ur face to communicate with you, it’s a tradition on his planet
The hair is really well done. Not a big fan of the inconsistent yellow subsurface scatter around ysko. Also has more saturation than the light source behind him which bothers me a little.
The buildings look like they were made with a fill bucket and a rectangle tool. You could probably spice that up with a few lit up windows and a little less straightness. I also noticed a blue smudge in the dirt. But other than that it’s pretty neat.
when creating twitter banners you shouldn’t leave the space like you did at the bottom of that one. it shows the full image on mobile devices and at different resolutions, so the gap will be visible.
however it is important to keep in mind not to put any important details (text for example) in the bit that supposedly gets cut off.
awesome artwork though!
yea, thanks so much! i didn’t realize that! <3
thank you! i definitely could improve on landscapes. for the lighting, i do tend to go overboard, so i plan on working on that! thanks so much for the input again!
do you have any tips on the getting the lighting just right? i saw some of you work and you definitely know what you are talking about. I could really use some pointers!
All I know is it makes an awesome Twitter header and I’m forever grateful!
Cropping aided the issue raised by @vishkars