Hello all! I recently completed a UI Commission for a game currently in development. The game is a comedy style game. Here is the UI design. What do you folks think?
The overall design of the shape is fine, no issues with the edges. I think the contrasts are out of places and don’t blend well/isn’t appealing to the eyes, especially the border and the microphone. The choice of colors could be improved as well, by adding another or just sticking to the shades of pink.
Nice job, however, I have some tips and feedback.
- You may not want to ask for feedback after you have already finished the commission. If you get negative feedback, it could hurt you.
- I suggest that you improve your watermark for visibility and protection. That watermark is very in your face and blocks me from seeing the UI properly. A watermark isn’t as simple as just putting text on something, you need to actually spend time making a watermark.
Looking at it at first, it is nice. The composition of it is nice, there is a good amount of detail but not too little of it. You have subtle color differences within the button which are noticeable. The text adds a nice fun feed to it, and the icon is definitely well done. Congratulations. However, I don’t personally like the empty space in the middle of the button. I would suggest filling it up more. Overall, this is good. I wouldn’t say there is too much feedback for me to give since this is only one button.
Also, I would suggest improving your presentation. After looking at it more closely, I noticed the microphone wire, which is a really nice detail, but I completely missed it because you put the UI on a black background. Presentation is important, I would recommend putting it on a background which helps viewers better see the button.
The empty space is for the person that ordered from me to put his text.
Thank you for your feedback though!
Will do! Thank you for your feedback!
Looks great! But I think you can do better
That’s really nice! The text is super cool.
Looking forward to see more of them.