Unfinished TPS Trailer, Feedback please

oh, in that case try to buy full filmora pack

It’s a icon from a diffrent popular game, with a watermark, its just text, and

image

I mean to improve, maybe an actual trailer of gameplay and not text with commander from TDS

okay here i go again

There is backstory on why,
This is the future, after all the armys were defeated, they had nothing to do, Commader's Second Line
was gonna say "Its Time to retire" until being inturupted on his Radio, Hence why he is now shocked
so the empoly some people, which are really good at fighting, due to it being called "Tower Protecc sim"

renders are good but you need animation gameplay stuff like that

Pretty sure @Phoqus didn’t permit you to use the TDS OSTs.

oops, yet i see videos from elite using:

  • Molten Doom
  • Frost Spirit’s Theme
  • Grave Diggers Theme
    Even Fallen King’s Theme

They aren’t going to copyright strike a youtuber who is bringing thousands of players to their experience.

makes since, also its unfinished so i’ll remoive the ost.

Yes, you’re gonna want gameplay, but you can also have those talking bits in there as well, without that Tower defense sim cop talking, as it would make it look like a complete copy of that game. Check out this video for some better pointers: How to Make an Indie Game Trailer - YouTube

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In my honest opinion, this trailer is a disaster.

  • Music is stolen
  • GFX is stolen
  • Plain white text on a black background as words
  • No hype or any previews of the game
  • More of a credits than a trailer
  • Longer than 30 seconds
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The trailer should actually show gameplay, not only text.

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Not his render, its a google image from TDS on roblox

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^ everything you said is true ^

This is just a plagarized essay more than a trailer

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Did you guys bother reading the backstory.
I think not

There is backstory on why,
This is the future, after all the armys were defeated, they had nothing to do, Commader’s Second Line
was gonna say “Its Time to retire” until being inturupted on his Radio, Hence why he is now shocked
so the empoly some people, which are really good at fighting, due to it being called “Tower Protecc sim”

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Yes, but the Commander render is owned by Tower Defense Simulator/Below Natural

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Yeah but did you get permission to use their OST or use the GFX in the video? Even if there is backstory that doesn’t excuse using others work…

Only way that would work is if it was a game like

“TDS Roleplay”, which at least will bring players to TDS

When I was reading TPS I was expecting
Third Person Shooter
not
Tower Protecc Simulator
:joy: :joy:

I highly suggest you fix the spelling and grammatical errors in this trailer, and this trailer has no doesn’t feature the product, which is kind of the point of a trailer. You should also use a different video editing software that doesn’t show a large watermark. ClipChamp is a good one I use.

Multiple grammatical errors:
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