Update on my Story Game: The Mansion!

Hello, everyone.
Before I mention the game, I have been really inactive, working on projects, including my very own story game. I have finished the full game, and I wanted to release it as a “Beta”, just for testing before I release ads.

If you have any feedback, suggestions, or any bugs mentioned, I’m all ears!

Game Link:

(Added two endings using the Ponchoking’s tutorial.)

DISCLAIMER: I did not copy anything involved with SamsonXVI’s Mansion. There is a different storyboard, and I changed the name of the story.
Game made by me, Silvisxx, and robloxguy9093.
Inspired by SamsonXVI.

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Definitely needs work on the map. A story game is nothing without it’s environment, and to be frank, the environment sucks. It looks visually unappealing, things such as the buildings when you first enter the game doesn’t even have windows. The chairs are too tall for the average avatar, the home isn’t laid out very well.

Of course, I understand if you are mainly a scripter, and got one of the non-builders to make the map.

In contrast, the scripting and UI side is very good, however I suggest creating an option to choose different replies such as in the Fallout Series.

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Thank you for the feedback. I will note that down.

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