(UPDATED) Feedback on my custom shotgun

[OnlyJay_WasHere (Jay)]

Hi! I was trying to make a shotgun:

Feedback on my custom gun

Hi! I tried to make my own gun. Here it is: [RobloxScreenShot20220518_085858917] It’s supposed to be a shotgun (even though it doesn’t really look like it). I’m planning to add textures and improve it in blender. Feel free to suggest how I can improve on it.

This is the previous model:

And this is the new model:

Feel free to reply on what good and what’s missing from it (either or both).

• The 1st one looks better
• The 2nd one looks better
• Both look great
• I think they both need to improve

[Tinfloco_Sushi (Tom)]

I like it is simple and classic.

Choose another color.

[NinjaFurfante07 (iKingNinja)]

Way better now, adding onto what @Tinfloco_Sushi said you may also want to decrease the width of it

[OnlyJay_WasHere (Jay)]

Thanks for suggestions. I’m using it for a gun animation.

[Megalodox_Official (Jevangelise)]

GGWP! This would fit very well in one of those wacky retro games such as “Make your own army”.

[1948phantom (The_Phantom)]

Maybe try putting a trigger instead of a button in?

Also for what I’m assuming is the magazine, try putting holes in the front so it looks like the rounds go in there.

But it looks really nice and if it’s intended for a retro game it will look amazing : )

[OnlyJay_WasHere (Jay)]

Thanks but I was just making the gun for fun. But making it for a retro game sounds nice too. Thanks (again)!

[OnlyJay_WasHere (Jay)]

Also made a sniper. See Feedback on my (VERY BASIC!) Sniper! which I’m planning to redo in Blender.

[samsful (Sam)]

Looks nice, it’s simple and beautiful. This would fit perfectly fine on a retro game!