[UPDATED] Feedback on the new office showcase specifically

Hello Developers,

To keep it short and simple:

I have made a similar post, which I made really long and unspecific.

I’m looking for feedback on my showcase place, specifically:

  • Ideas that you would add
  • Suggestions for improvement
  • Changes you might wanna see
  • Feedback on the future lighting technology

I will leave pictures of the place AND the game link this time, because I have noticed, that people mostly do that, instead of the game link.

Game link: [SHOWCASE] Crash’s Office - Roblox

I’m looking forward to read your comments!

Cheers,
CrashFacts

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The place is fabulous. However, Sorry if I come off as rude but, I’d like to ask why there is a bed in an office.

Please ignore any grammatical or spelling errors as English is not my native language…

Hello @EalenorWolfson, I don’t see you as rude, since you have the right to ask questions in case you’re confuse about something within my work.

The platform “ROBLOX” carries the motto “Powering Imagination” for a reason. So I decided to put my office showcase place into the spotlight, and show off what I can do with my Studio knowledge.

Yes, originally I planned on making it an office, as you can still see in the early stages of it, yet I decided to add more rooms and thought it would be cool, if you wouldn’t have just the office there, but you could also be resident in the same building, so you technically live and work from out of one building if you get what I mean.

It has many reasons which include the following:

  • Imagination & Creativity
  • Showcase material
  • The cutesy and creative idea of living and working in the same block.

It may come off as surprising at first, but if you have any other comments or questions regarding this, please let me know!

I appreciate your feedback and the question.

Sincerely,
CrashFacts

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well said crashfacts! very well sadi!

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One last thing I would like to mention, is that I adore unique things, something that varies from reality sometimes. Perhaps you don’t see an office next to your living space everyday, yet Roblox is a place where you’re able to imagine and create.

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@ValkyrieHuskyy , Thank You for the beautiful explanation.

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Hello @ValkyrieHuskyy,
Looks really cool! It looks like a vibe game to me. I really love the building and that Nintendo switch there XD. Cyberpunky.

sincerely, CheesyBlocks.

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Hey @ValkyrieHuskyy, nice to see you on the DevForum.

Anyways, I believe based on the pictures you’ve provided, and by visiting the place itself, you’ve created an amazing showcase. The small and unique details are very creative, the build overall is sufficient as well. Your lighting choices are also very nice. Great work!

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Hello Developer,

I appreciate and take the feedback to heart. I was looking for feedback on the lighting because I have never worked with future lighting technology before and I’m really glad it turned out the way I wanted it to be.

Other than that, I want to thank you for the kind words and wish you the best of luck in your career as a developer, whether big or small!

Roblox is an imaginary platform for all kinds of ages, which has no end for developers. All you have to do is image and create!

Cheers,
CrashFacts

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Hello Cheesy,

It’s nice to read those kind words of yours, and I wanna wish you the best of luck within building in studio as well.

Thanks for stepping by and providing me feedback!

Great use of colours and quite frankly, some pretty nice creativity. I’d personally add some lighting to these nanoleafs to make them pop even more.
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Other than that, pretty good build mate. Well done.

Hello @Musketfall,

Thank you for the feedback and for the contribution to the topic, since it doesn’t only provide me with feedback and compliments, but other developers with ideas and hints on what to pay close attention to when building.

I will take it in consideration and wish you the best of luck with your career as a builder on the imaginary platform Roblox.

Cheers,
CrashFacts

The models in the room aren’t very nice and look a bit messy, and so do the buildings outside, as they do not mix with the skybox. The overall layout is nice, though, and could be improved on the outside.

Hello @PunkKidXXII,

Thank you for stumbling across my post on the Roblox Developer Forums, since this is a great opportunity for me to take suggestions and feedback on my builds.

I would have a few questions myself on your post though.

Can you define what you consider “messy” in your own words? [Is it rushed, too detailed, low-detailed, etc]

I have been thinking about the skybox a lot recently and was planning on removing that, so I consider this as a confirmation for my removal because a few other people have been saying that as well.

Hope to hear from you soon!

Sincerely,
CrashFacts

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An example of messy models would be on the bed. The pillows have edges that shouldn’t be there, the shirts look very flat, so I would suggest using a mesh or beveling edges on them. Also, the sock is too small.

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Hello again,

I appreciate you clarifying the problem you were having with my assets and want to thank you for the feedback again.

If you have any questions or other comments to leave here, please let me know and I’ll consider reading the post as soon as I can.

Other than that, I wish you the best of luck on your future development of yours.

Sincerely,
CrashFacts

Off topic question: do you know a way for a player to be afk but not get kicked from any game

Hey there reviewers,

I have updated the office by adding shadows and futuristic lighting to the game. Let me know how it looks here!