Much like my previous piece of music I composed, I went with a piano + drums + guitar + sax combo and tried to make something out of it.
I kept to the lighthearted & simple chord progression like the previous work. However, I think this piece has a bit more movement and feel to it. Any feedback or suggestions is appreciated!
This music sounds EXTREMELY GOOD AND WELL-MADE! Nice job on creating it! How long did it take you to make this music? Will you use it for anything? What program/software do you use to make music? This is very unique for Roblox!
It is in the ballpark for uptempo, but whether it is funky, you’ll need to consult the drums for that. There are ways to find it in the way for funky(or what I believe a definition for funky is), as I can hear that the sounds are a little dense and turning a bit too frequently. That drummer surely sounds exhausted making the twists and turns…
The only field of improvement is to simplify the rhythm of the drums, they seem to take up too much space without any ways to breathe in the mix.
I completely agree with @Operatik, there isn’t necessarily a time or place when an instrument isn’t playing, I would add some breathing room between the sax, piano, and drums.