Well I don’t know about the second paragraph, the only thing I’d say would raise some eyebrows is “Rusdynian pigs” I don’t know what that is referring to and pretty sure moderation won’t either xd
yeah im not sure what “Rusdynian” means either, but it sounds very aggresive when you say “you Rusdynian pig”, I think its clear enough that its meant to offend someone, even if its a fictional character.